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i. i want to make your heart
bleed and laugh and cry and
smile and feel instead of just
yawning from lack of love, but
i'm afraid being around you
makes me too empty to do so.


ii. i'm sorry. it hurts
too much to explain.


iii. go to sleep. i'll be here when you wake up.

except you weren't. you lied, and you left.

and i'm afraid to go back to sleep because i didn't even get to say goodbye.


iv. i think i'll be
like the city of
atlantis and pull
a disappearing act
out of your life.
sort of an experiment with different styles.
sort of not happy with it.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I don't see why though. :love:
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FL4L Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2009
i'm happy with it and like a catrillion other people are to so be happy =D greaty poem!
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Amertie Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2009
i'll try to be.
thank you, as always.
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FL4L Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2009
you welcome as always =D XD
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Scribbles1337 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009  Student Photographer
They're Amazing.
I Wonder What They Would Be Like If You Were Just Experimenting.
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Amertie Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009
thank you. =]
i was mostly experimenting.
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ItsxMagik Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009
iv is incredible.
The style is a little different, but you did really well with it.
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Amertie Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009
the style drove me insane.
as did ending on an even number.
but thank you.
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ItsxMagik Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2009
You're welcome - you don't like even numbers?
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Amertie Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2009
i do and i don't.
i don't like ending on even numbers.
but i don't mind them in general.
i'm odd. i like things to be uneven. unable to be split apart evenly.
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