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Literature by Little-Miss-Priss


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are you listening?

one.

the trains are
burning. planes are
crashing, and i can only hope
they're not yours.

tides are coming in,
breaking the shore, carrying
the ground beneath you
away, away with them,
and we can only

watch.

but see that guy over there?
he's laughing.


-

two.

there are voices
inside my head, pulling
at the roots of my hair and
banging on the walls,
begging me, screaming at me:
'please, let me out',
'please hear me, hear me,
hear me.'

-

three.

until they're all i can hear,
until i want to give in and
give up, and they've won, they've
won, until i feel like the ability

to live life fully is a dream, a hope, a
something meant only
for the lucky, until
depression fills my lungs, and
i need a new source of oxygen, and

-

four.

oh, god,
i can't breathe.

-

five.

tell me it'll be
alright. please. just lie
and say

it'll be alright.

no.
.
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JUST-RAYmichael Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
love it.
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BlueSnowGiesha Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009
another tie for first :]
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Amertie Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009
:hug:
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BlueSnowGiesha Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009
^-^
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TELL-TALExHEART Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
oh, you write wonderfully. This poem is amazing.
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
thank you.
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TELL-TALExHEART Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2009
you're welcome.
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AliceWonderStar Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
I love it....it is freat and so perfect for my mood right now...
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Amertie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
:hug:
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AliceWonderStar Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
I added a couple new things from my Myspace blog...thought more people would read it here...TeeHee.
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