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even on the gray days, your eyes flicker dimly with hope. there is still a comet in the night sky, somewhere, singing your dreams and hopes for you.

even in the darkest silence, your heart is still beating, softly, musically. you just have to listen. you just have to hope.


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you haven't lost yet.

sometimes, life feels like a horrible play, and everyone is outperforming you. sometimes, you lose yourself in the characters you play. you forget your lines. you trip. you screw up.

but it's not over yet. there's always a chance for a happier tomorrow.

but more than that - there's still the rest of today to be lived.
it's not too late.


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somewhere, there is someone that understands. there is someone who only wants to brighten your day and paint your sky rainbow. there is someone who would let you stand on their shoulders if it meant helping you reach your dreams.

somewhere, there is someone who only wants to make you happy.

you just have to find them.


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even if happiness has been put to the back of the shelf of your life; even if it's gone sour
or dusty
or lost its shine-

well, you can always take it out again.
you can always wipe the dust off.

don't forget to laugh and breathe and enjoy life.
don't forget to smile.
don't forget -


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i love you.
so. the title [and the general idea behind this] was inspired by the wonderful ~indie-isnt-indie and her epic penguin named stuart.

hey look, i wrote something that's actually happy!
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:iconvinniex3:
Vinniex3 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
4 & 5 ----> most wonderful statements in this world <3
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:iconlimpha:
Limpha Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
Simply awesome.
One day I'll draw something about it.

Thank you, you made my day :hug:
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
draw a penguinnnn.
i'd smile.

:hug:
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:iconandreea-oana:
andreea-oana Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009
not even sailor moon couldn't of said it better (:
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
hahahaha. =]
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IceMoon-Wraith Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009  Student Writer
I'm happy you wrote something happy :)
I love you more.
Don't forget this applies to you too, my beautiful girl
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009
no, i love you more.
:hug:
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IceMoon-Wraith Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009  Student Writer
:heart:
:love:
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:iconalice-liz:
alice-liz Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
"somewhere, there is someone who only wants to make you happy.

you just have to find them."

I think I found my someone. But it's complicated...
x.x

I love it! So beautiful!
*-*

And it was good for me. Thanks.
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
well. good luck?

:heart:
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:iconalice-liz:
alice-liz Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2009
Yeah. I'm goign to need...
^^
Thanks
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:iconbeyondweird:
beyondweird Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009
Ooh, a happy one :)

I love 2 - stage metaphors are great.

Your happy poem really makes me smile :)
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:iconjade-whisper:
jade-whisper Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
This is soooo beautiful!!! I love it!
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:icondead-neon-light:
dead-neon-light Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
thank you for making me smile !
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catieisavampire159 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009  Student Artisan Crafter
holy shit.

happiness is epic.
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009
hahahaha.
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:iconchrysanthe-al:
chrysanthe-aL Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009
yay to happy.
this made me smile.
5 made me smile more.
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009
i'm glad you smiled. :heart:
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:iconchrysanthe-al:
chrysanthe-aL Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009
i am touched at that comment.
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:iconlian-kun:
Lian-kun Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009
Ahhh~
This really makes me feel hopeful and motivated :heart:
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009
i'm glad. =]
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:iconwolf-rider:
Wolf-Rider Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009
i like when your poems write happiness all over the paper.
look at the letters closely,
they're screaming for you to be happy again.
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009
:hug:
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
so lovely and inspirational!:iconlovepurpleplz:
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009
thanks.
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
you are very welcome.
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:icondulce-acrisora:
dulce-acrisora Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
YEAH!
Congratulation for writing something that commands hope!

I felt soo good while reading it! You resuscitated my heart! thank you! :D i needed the reassuring words!
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
thank you. :hug:
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
i rather enjoy part two. the play analogy is WINWINWIN. :heart:
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
thanksss. <3
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:iconesotericheart:
EsotericHeart Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
This is so hopeful.
[You're beautiful. ♥]
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
thanks. :heart:
[you're insanely beautiful, you know.]
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EsotericHeart Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009
:iconlove:
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:iconselenamoon:
SelenaMoon Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
when you write like this, it inspires hope.
[the happy is beautiful]
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
aw, thank you. :heart:
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midnightincarnate Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
I'm running out of things to say. Your poetry is always beautiful and you are so wonderfully talented. Makes me tear up every time. :heart:
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
aw, thank you. :hug:
i hope you never run out of things to say, haha.
i'd miss your comments. =]
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bailey--elizabeth Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009   General Artist
good god this is stunning.

i love the happy.

:heart:
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
good god you are stunning.

i do too.

:heart:
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:iconxarkis:
Xarkis Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
My God this is wonderful it made my day ...see my puppy died yesterday and i've been down ever since but this brightened up my day....I really love this i will come to read it when i feel sad or when i need some encouragement

Thank you for having such a loving soul and mind.
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
awwww. :hug:
i'm sorry.
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TheCoalMineCanary Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
yay! i love all of your pieces, but the happiest ones give me this little glow in my heart. :D
it's really, really lovely. :heart:
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
thank you. =]
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TheCoalMineCanary Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome. :heart:
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:iconchasingpaper:
chasingpaper Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
This is really nice.
Haha, I'm hoping alright xD this poem made me feel better...
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
i'm glad to hear it. =]
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:iconailoura-aithe:
Ailoura-aithe Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
today is one of those days where i feel like losing hope; when i didn't realise i might be among the stars till i found myself falling back to earth. i'm closing my eyes and making a wish on the 3rd stanza. thankyou.
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
:hug:

the third stanza will come true if you want it to. =]
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:iconmisakithegorelover:
MisakiTheGoreLover Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
Really, really beautiful!
I have to admit that i was a little touched after finishing to read it...
:+favlove:
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:iconamertie:
Amertie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
aw, thank you. :hug:
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