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soft. by ~Amertie:iconAmertie:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


you said
the sky is a canvas,

and i have written
your heart
with its candles

(i love you)

and this truth
is soft, a whispered
confession, painted
in petals;

this promise
is fragile, a run
away cloud, a porcelain
child -

so please,
tread softly.
©2009 ~Amertie
:iconamertie:

Author's Comments

i've gone all mushy.

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=GwenavhyeurAnastasia Jul 9, 2009, 6:01:59 PM
lyk omg i love your work.

i already gave you my thoughts on this. i love it.

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~Amertie Jul 9, 2009, 6:02:38 PM
lyk omg i'm totally going to shoot you.

and yeah, i know. thanks for the help, again. <3
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~Erica-Jay Jul 9, 2009, 6:04:01 PM
mushy is good.
i love it!! :heart:
:icongwenavhyeuranastasia:
=GwenavhyeurAnastasia Jul 9, 2009, 6:04:08 PM
lyk omg that would be so mean.

anytime. <3 i'm uber jealous of how you wrote this, so you know. as well as how. everything about it is soft. yes. love.

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~Awasteof-paint Jul 9, 2009, 6:04:58 PM
uninspired my asssss! haha
this is great obviously. it's impossible for you to create ugly words. :heart:

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we will fold and freeze together far away from here.
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~Amertie Jul 9, 2009, 6:05:09 PM
lyk omg you're mean.

how i wrote it?
and yeah. it felt. soft to write. D:
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~Amat3il Jul 9, 2009, 6:05:53 PM
I like this, :)

--
The flower said, "I wish I was a tree,"
The tree said, "I wish I could be
A different kind of tree,
The cat wished that it was a bee,
The turtle wished that it could fly
Really high into the sky,
Over rooftops and then dive
Deep into the sea.
:iconamertie:
~Amertie Jul 9, 2009, 6:05:54 PM
hahaha, it comes randomlyyyy.
um, you haven't seen the stuff i don't submit.
but thanks. :heart:
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