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there are demons in your eyes, darling;

fall asleep listening to their screams, fall
asleep tracing your ribcage and wonder if maybe
your heart is a ghost, maybe your heart is haunting

someone, somewhere. fall asleep and dream of
needles prodding at your mind, pulling out the weeds
as if your mind was a garden, your mind is a

garden but once the weeds are gone, there is nothing but
dirt; dirt and worms and nightmares and screams.
dream of fingers shoved down your throat, and they have found

your heart and your heart is not a ghost, no, your heart is alive,
because the fingers are clawing your heart and it hurts like
fingernails on blackboards and you scream, and someone is listening but they're

laughing;


fall asleep and forget you're dreaming.
©2009 ~Amertie
:iconamertie:

Author's Comments

uh.

llama?

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This is really good. :D
I love the metaphor of the heart being a ghost.
:iconawasteof-paint:
and someone is listening but they're

laughing;


fall asleep and forget you're dreaming.


oh, you're just too wonderful. :heart:

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we will fold and freeze together far away from here.
:iconwhitenightglasses:
[llamallamaCAKE.]

i love this :heart:
tis amazing :]


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:damphyr:
:iconsouprrman:
:llama:?

beautiful work.

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i really wish i had a fish.
:iconpineacus:
your heart and your heart is not a ghost, no, your heart is alive,-- ect, is the most beautiful paragraph. I found consolation in it. Don't ask, even I don't wanna know.
And I've been missing your beautiful mind. :heart:

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are small matters compared to what lies within us.
:iconeternalfreedom:
oh this is just wonderful.
:heart:

--
“And if waking up alone in a car is about as good as it gets I'll know I did my best, I know I did my best to be yours.”

GG Forum
GGM
:iconcolormehappy19:
:iconwowplz:

--
rain flow to the roots
rain drench my boots
rain douse the flame
rain forget this poet's name
:iconamertie:
and you're just too beautiful. :heart:
:iconamertie:
[iwantsome!]

thanks. :heart:

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