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i've been thinking and... by ~Amertie:iconAmertie:

Categories Literature > Prose > Non-Fiction > General Non-Fiction


i've come to a realization:

no one can make me smile the way you do.
©2009 ~Amertie
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i kind of want to add something to this but it feels complete to me.
thoughts?

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~Tasha25 Jul 17, 2009, 9:34:03 AM
I don't know what else you can add. I think it's beautiful just like this.

And it hurts. Because it's true.

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mycutelobster.co.uk
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~bitexxher Jul 17, 2009, 9:34:59 AM
Leave it the way it is.

But that really...sucks :[
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~Amertie Jul 17, 2009, 9:35:53 AM
there's a lot i've thought of adding, but it kills the point, i think.

thank you.

the truth hurts?
:hug:
:iconamertie:
~Amertie Jul 17, 2009, 9:36:05 AM
i probably will.

why does that suck?
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~star-love Jul 17, 2009, 9:36:48 AM
[I hope one day I'll be able to do that for you.]

Or something like that. I dunno. Feels complete (':

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Will is to be able to divide a bar of chocolate Hersheys in six parts and eat only one of them.
:iconamertie:
~Amertie Jul 17, 2009, 9:39:03 AM
ohh, i like that. will mess around with it and see if i like this better with it.

thanks. =]
:iconbitexxher:
~bitexxher Jul 17, 2009, 9:42:01 AM
Well, firstly, is this post true?

If it is, well, that sucks.

I looked at it from the perspective where the narrator is speaking about an old love.

So I thought, 'wow, that must suck for a new love.'

I don't know. Did this make sense?
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~KnockMeOut Jul 17, 2009, 9:43:36 AM
please don't add anything here. it is complete and it is perfect, it hurts and it made me cry, there is enough emotion in this, you should it keep it like it is.

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