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this is the song
to your heart.

listen.


-

part zero.
oh, dearest,
why are you locked inside
a bathroom stall? no one
to hold you, tell you sweet
lies and say you are
beautiful, say you are
perfect? it's not the end of
the world, not yet. if it was,
wouldn't there be
fireworks?

-

part one.

sleeping.

your heart is not yet
dead; please do not
say it is. if it was dead,
it wouldn't hurt this
much.

your heart is only sleeping.

-

part two.

when the only melody in your head
is a break up song, and the only thing
your heart seems capable of doing
is twisting itself into knots, and the only
thing you want to do is hide and escape
and

disappear

-

part three.

we are talking about finding
eternity in the things people
throw away. we are talking about
listening to the moments of silence
in between heart beats. we are talking
about distances shortening and
people realizing they can
cross
them.

we are talking about
finding happiness.


-

part four.

one of the greatest tragedies
in life is that
those who judge us
can't even seem to judge us
correctly.

-

part five.

'how do you know
my heart has a song?'

'it has a beat, doesn't it?'

listen.

-

part six.

we could stay up late
at night, until sleep seems
only a beat away, until
words become only soft
murmurings of the heart.

-

part seven.

you are a piano, dirtied
by the hands of humans,
and yet, you hold onto
purity, somehow, and
there is someone out there,
somewhere, who will
come along and make
the most beautiful music
come out of you.

(i'm sure of this.)

-

part x.

life has no pattern, just as
love has no rules.

-

ssh and close your eyes,
dearest,
sleep is waiting.
©2008-2009 ~Amertie
:iconamertie:

Author's Comments

this seems to be an in-between poem,
something that's half my style now
and half of what it seems to be changing to be.

i'm happy how it turned out, but i'm horribly self conscious about this piece and style.

i would love suggestions.

p.s. thank you amber for helping me edit. :heart:

Comments


love 5 5 joy 0 0 wow 2 2 mad 0 0 sad 1 1 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconcolormehappy19:
That is beautiful. I love the style and how you convey the emotions so well. Great job. I love it.

--
rain flow to the roots
rain drench my boots
rain douse the flame
rain forget this poet's name
:iconamertie:
:hug: thank you very much.
:iconsmylepowr:
i lovee part seven. you make music with your words. ♥
:icontigerpusen05:
:heart:

it's not the end of
the world, not yet. if it was,
wouldn't there be
fireworks?

That part is... It really just hit me, it reminded me of what I dreamt tonight. There was this town, with a 'street' like what you'd imagine Venice looks like, rows of houses on either side of a small canal, with yellow streetlights all the way and small bridges connecting both sides. I was flying past it, and suddenly fireworks starten flying between them, and it was beautiful.
This is sadder, but it's also just as beautiful.

--
White rabbits grant your wishes, you know.
:iconeternalember:
I love this sofuckingmuch.

"your heart is only sleeping." Never thought of it like that before. Made me smile. =]

I think 1, 3 and 5 are my favorites.

--
*****
I speak of the stars over the high terraces and the indecipherable sentences they write on the stone of the sky...
:iconamertie:
that's a beautiful compliment. :heart:
:iconamertie:
oh, that sounds lovely.
i wish i could have seen that dream.
i think it would've made me smile.
:heart:
:iconamertie:
i'm honestly surprised so many people do.
:hug:

i'm glad i made you smile. =]

that version of five wasn't even in the original, isn't that funny?

:heart:
:icontigerpusen05:
If someone didn't smile at that dream I'd wonder if they could smile at all - it was breath-taking.
:heart:

--
White rabbits grant your wishes, you know.
:iconeternalember:
:hug:

^.^

Well, I'm glad you put it in then! :)

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*****
I speak of the stars over the high terraces and the indecipherable sentences they write on the stone of the sky...

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