literature

blowing bubbles.

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Literature Text

last night we
watched the clouds
fall.

and you said:
     you are beautiful.

and i am afraid
that i might one day
actually believe you

and

sometimes i feel like
i'm just this big bundle
of problems and i have
been searching and
i can't find the answers.

you told me that the answers
are in blowing bubbles and
tying shoe laces and chasing
dreams, but honestly i just

don't

understand. i have tried
to chase my dreams but

they only run away.

.

you told me that you can't
stand how i sound when i
give up and the hope
is knocked out of me and
you can't stand me when
i am busy counting
the empty spaces in the
walls and in my heart

and you said you
can't stand me anymore,
you just

can't.

.

you said:
      love is not a game.

but then, how
did i end up
losing?
i don't know.

writing this felt... different.

suggestions?
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slowlyfallingpart's avatar
beautiful, true and beautiful. This is going straight to my faves <3